It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent for instance for sport, music or businessman, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician or successful individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Successful people always come in with a big fan following. It is a popular belief that some individuals are born with innate talents. Nonetheless. others believe that people can be trained to be experts in business, sports or even music to triumph in these fields. This essay would argue between both these views and conclude with my opinion.
On the one hand, it is a popular belief that some people are simply god gifted with a high level of inherent knowledge, when it comes to sports business or music. So they are bound to be more successful in life due to them being naturally blessed with talent. Take for example, Sachin Tendulkar who is a well-known Indian cricketer, he had been inclined towards cricket right from the childhood, which made his brother also opt for a school which gave more weightage to sports than to academics. His passion for cricket had made it possible for him to participate in the Ranjhi trophy competition at the age of fifteen and in his debut match only he had scored a century to leave everyone enthralled. It is because of his flair for cricket that he had the most successful innings in the Indian sports history.
On the other hand, some people might argue as to what can make an any ordinary man highly successful? The sole reason behind this perseverance. If one work hard enough to attain something one will definitely get it regardless how hard it is. For instance, former and late CEO at Apple, Steve Jobs was not born with innate talent, even he was the poorest scorer in his school and did not manage to get enrolled to the next grade, but his hard working and commitment to do unique work rewarded him. He was known as a business magnate and an investor
To conclude, I am of the opinion there is nothing like inborn talent even among successful people. Self-devotion, resilience and firm determination are some virtues that could definitely bring success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nonetheless,
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Suggestion: Others
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...of inherent knowledge, when it comes to sports business or music. So they are bound to...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74550898204 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57024549949 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4341924339 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278265969017 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908438622961 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626232431005 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155455540814 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655672401259 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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