Write a letter to your neighbor about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home.
In the letter, you should:
• describe the damage
• say how you feel about this problem
• suggest to him what actions he should take.
Dear Olivia,
I cannot resist myself to inform you that some parts of my car got severely damaged while you were parking your car in the lane on Sunday.
To begin with, the right wing mirror of my brand new BMW was completely broken with the collision of your car. As if this damage were not enough, your car also struck the backlights of my car. Not only the lights are cracked but these are not working as well. To make matters worse, my car got few dents, which are clearly visible, on the back of it.
I was completely shocked after seeing so many damages to my car and thought that someone deliberately did this damage. However, it became clear when I saw, in CCTV footage, that it was your car which collided with my favorite car damaging many parts.
As damages are many and costs to repair is also high, I suggest that you either get my car repaired in a renowned car repair shop or pay a lump sum of $ 1200 to me as compensation. I would also appreciate if you help yourself to follow parking rules in the lane.
I trust that you will this matter your immediate attention.
Sincerely Yours,
Md Jamshed Alam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1200'.
Suggestion: $1200
...ed car repair shop or pay a lump sum of $ 1200 to me as compensation. I would also app...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47115384615 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27442394488 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2470885524 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311182125415 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122906993698 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862843444254 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197607498207 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497938932017 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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