The chart below the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the internet everyday from 2003-2006.

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The chart below the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the internet everyday from 2003-2006.

The bar chart illustrates the information about the percentage of adults of various age groups using the internet on daily basis in the Great Britain in the year of 2003 to 2006.
It is clearly that the main users of internet were adults who age 16 to 24 and they shared the same percentage which was 80% in 2003 and 2004.In 2004,the figures increased significantly to 100%, but decreased slightly to 90% in the next year. Age group of 25 to 34 showed an upward trend from 50% to 80%, between 2003 and 2006.
There were similar increases for the adults who age 45 to 54 old's rising from 60% in 2003 to 80% in 2006. As for other group, who age 55 to 64 the percentage had minor fluctuation, the overall trend of this group was upwards and other group who age 65 and over, in 2003 the percentage of adults was around 18%, but it increased during the end of the period and reached at 20%.
Overall analysis of the bar graph that adults who age 16 to 24 consumed the more internet as compared with other groups.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32105263158 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31593899039 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8754844944 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.833333333 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44178660716 0.215688989381 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230319119752 0.103423049105 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722179208551 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273863468824 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823157330243 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.85 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.37 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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