Advertisements spoil our enjoyment of today’s entertainment. I think the adverts are often more enjoyable than the programs they interrupt. Discuss both statements and give your own opinion?
As markets becoming competitive, advertising remains to being the main tool to get priority during tendency. some people consider adverts appear to become an unpleasant interruption to their enjoyment while watching tv programs. In my point of view, advertisements has advantages and disadvantages and the following essay will carry out comparative analysis of different options in favor of the both sides.
considering on positive aspects of adverts, it must be admitted that the advertising is the most widespread way of introducing a new product or service straight to consumers. Therefore, advertisements are often found funny, artistic or thought-provoking which enable to make a little break and stimulate careful attention against tv program. Besides, advertisers always aim to capture people attention so that it sometimes makes to feel a wonderful impression and provide to take a pleasure from creativeness.
Undoubtedly, there are some negative sides of advertising, such as interruption during tv shows deteriorate the perception of the visual world. Apart from, advertisers intend to persuade customers that purchasing the latest trend products leads to happiness and to be ahead. For example, it can be seen on children behavior that after appearing some adverts they become a pestering or nagging which consequently put pressure on their parents. Furthermore, adverts may last longer and afterwards interrupted tv programs finish lately regardless to fixed time.
it can be concluded that advertisement plays a great role on the economy and at my standpoint, adverts have to be well scheduled in order to be an interesting and effective in spite of its making enjoyable motion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55384615385 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25517339725 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7933662492 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150461147088 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536752235818 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300497813998 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880455677412 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175458440446 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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