You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1) Thank your friend for the holiday.
2) Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
3) Give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Martin,
I hope you are doing great. I would like to thank you for spending a great time last week with me. I really enjoyed the vacation specially the San Francisco beaches and Vegas Casinos. The food cooked by your mom was awesome and mouth-watering. I really appreciate you for taking leaves from office as time and money are the most important things in today era.
I would like to tell you that I have forgotten my brown wallet at your home. It would be in the drawer of the wardrobe in your room. As such, there are few dollars in the wallet, but I have some important documents like my driving license, debit and credit cards which I need on a daily basis.
Moreover, It's a luck that one of my friend Kevin is coming to San Jose next week for some business trip and I have already asked him to pick up my wallet from your home. It would be great if you can tell your mom about the same so that she can hand over my wallet to Kevin since you may not be available at home during the day time because of your job. You can reach Kevin at 408-913-1019 or call me once he will come to pick my wallet to confirm his identity.
I hope to see you soon again.
Best Wishes
Richard Ford
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pending a great time last week with me. I really enjoyed the vacation specially t...
^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...h I need on a daily basis. Moreover, Its a luck that one of my friend Kevin is c...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22173913043 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1547020724 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3357667396 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6923076923 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350366846713 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121127863652 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08103602201 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211539760288 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426178946195 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.