Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
happiness is the ultimate goal of a persons life. We all seek to joyness by seeking success in life by accomplishing our goals. Whether happiness is felt more in the early years of our life or during adulthood, is a question that divides opinion. In this essay I shall compare both views and sum up with a lucid conclusion of personal opinion.
some people feel that it is obvious from the long and strong laughter of children; it is evident from the long hours spent in the playground and the innocence seen in the eyes of children that they are the happiest. what burden do they have? what responsibilities do they have to carry? Nothing but homework and brushing their teeth at night. Indeed, merely the scene of them playing is no matched by many joys of parents. this fact shows a lot who is happier.
On the other hand, some people think that eventhough adulthood is weighed with work, commitments and responsibilities, it is more enjoyable for several reasons. Firstly, a sense of freedom. Young children have curfews, while adults do not. A man or woman can go any where they like without being restricted by a guardian. Secondly, there are more things to do to be happy. there are simply more opportunities for adults to be happier than for kids. Take for example entertainment. For kids liesure is limited to themeparks and video games, but adults can party, drink alcohol. Wrok could also be a source of joy if one works in a field that he loves.
In conclusion, I am with the view that adults are happier than children since they have more ways to be happy than kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63475177305 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65117586443 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2950051301 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.35 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160454992867 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376532178517 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505861047654 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085824745442 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325418329515 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.