if you could change one important thing in your hometown, then what could you change in your home town? and why?

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if you could change one important thing in your hometown, then what could you change in your home town? and why?

my hometown is my very favorite place. from my child hood i am living here. my primary, secondary and tertiary level education accomplished here. my home town is full of several scenic beauty places. health facility, and education facility is in topmost position.

due to population explosion my homeland becoming narrow. natural natural places destroyed by urbanization and housing. roads become narrow. there is increasing number of vehicles causes unexpected jam in high way.

in my homeland there is scarcity of furnished high way as well as underground railway services. on the reason of unexpected jam we have lost much of our valuable times in the road and we are getting tired by air pollution .actually i feel that it is not fare. the inhabitants of our homeland cannot tolerate this situation further.

i thing or expect that if i have the power or i would like to build many flyover bridges, and underground railway service systems to avoided unexpected jam in my working cities. and i also like to decentralization of cities.it can be suggest that my home land will become as my such homeland as it was previously .

finally i like to explore that if i have an opportunity then i solve the huge traffic by improving transportation system and decentralization of my native land.

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