Walking is known to be beneficial for health but these days the number of people walking has reduced a lot. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem?
health of human is made much better by walking. however, today, walking has been declined enough by majority of people. it has a factor behind this problem as well as remedial action, which I will substantiate in the upcoming paragraphs before reaching to a relevant conclusion.
To commence with first and foremost cause behind reduce of walking is a technology. Undoubtedly, people spend much time on mobiles for sending and receive the information and playing games in computers and cellphones. In this way, they do not play physical activities and face many health problems in their life. For example, it is researched by world health organization that around 50% people suffered from dangerous diseases owing ti lack of walking. consequently, breakthrough of technology is responsible for this biggest hardship.
Moving towards solution to solve this problem with less uses of vehicles. people should walk on foot somewhere near at their house rather than transportation. Not only, it can improve walking among people but also, they can protect from harmful ailments like, knee pain, diabetes, psychopathic etcetera. For instance, as an ancient human were not use any mode of transport and they were keep fit and healthy owing to long walk. As a result, an increasing level of walking easily which will better for modern generation.
To conclude, although, this problem is deep rooted because of many reasons, yet, it can be fixed by working shoulder to shoulder, because every lock has a key. Despite of health illness, people use to technology. however, walking can improve if one avoid much use of vehicles and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26515151515 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78705521432 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.52150537 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316306778778 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903269310524 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232834001068 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176682449967 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450137071918 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.