The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the quantity of visits to two new music websites, namely Pop Parade and Music Choice during the surveyed period of 15 days
Overall, both websites experience fluctuations in the number of visits. However, Pop Parade almost alway receive more visits than Music Choice.
In fact, there are nearly 120,000 visits to the former compared to only 40,00 to the latter on day 1. Over the next three days, the figure for Pop Parade slightly fluctuates at over 100,000 while that for Music Choice changes erratically, halving to only 20,000 on the 2nd day and then soaring to 60,000 on day 3 before plunging back to 20,000 on day 4.
From day 4 to day 7, the visit number to Pop Parade slumps from over 100,000 to its trough of under 40,000. It slightly fluctuates at around this low level from day 7 to day 9 before shooting up to a peak of 150,000 on day 11 only to fall back 80,000 on days 12 and 13. It then hikes to a new peak of 160,000 to finish the period surveyed, At the same time, the number of visits to Music Choice slightly goes up and down at around 30,000 from the 4th day to the 11th day and then abruptly soared to a peak of around 120,000 on day 12. This high level remains for the next two days and sank to roughly 70,000 on day 15
Despite all the ups and downs, both websites receive more visits at the end of period than at the beginning
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-01 | Nguyễn Đỗ Phước | 67 | view |
| 2015-06-18 | tomamircea2015 | 70 | view |
| 2014-06-13 | oktaHrp | 77 | view |
| 2014-02-12 | danny oktanto | 60 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28352490421 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1418207108 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8674028898 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.75 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121491576596 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749481112345 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418005067994 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939504273776 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420094002846 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.84 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.14 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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