Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In recent years, a rapid increase in tourism is seen due to the ecstatic views and beautiful places that the nature offers us. This essay will discuss the benefits and bane of few of these tourist places.
There are numerous places in the world that attracts tourism, especially the ones with difficult conditions. One of the many advantages of travelling to such a place is its extravagant and unbelievable view. People find tourist spots such as Sahara Desert rare and yet so attractive due to its natural scene. It not only allures tourism but also filmmakers and cinema houses that want to capture their shots using such backgrounds. Secondly, for most of the historical places, there are surprising ancestral stories linked to it, which makes people want to visit.
Whilst there are multiple benefits that attract visitors, it is hard to ignore their disadvantages. At times, the extreme weather conditions make human survival difficult. The Antarctic, for example, faces extreme winters and commutation becomes nearly impossible during such times. Also, there is a high risk of floods, tornadoes and other natural calamities that could be fatal to the tourists. Supply of the necessities of life like food and shelter could be difficult here due to lack of resources.
In conclusion, visitors should keep in mind the extreme conditions while travelling to such places. Although such kind of travels offer a lifetime experience, one should be extremely careful and should not forget that nothing compares when it comes to saving one’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21513944223 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67716633177 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1977398169 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236170245897 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719168872227 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423253609333 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12205898322 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570320098711 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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