Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
In this modern the manner we dwell human temper and mental expansion is profoundly predispose by the universal disciplines. We now fathom the magnitude of inherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to sever in case a personage’s selfhood and development are more influenced by genetic factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).
Research, hooking to tantamount, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual’s life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. It seems that the experiences we have in life are hence coincident and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.
In my opinion is that there is no one major influence in a people life. Instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting. It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person from the moment they were born.
In a nutshell, I do not surmise that either nature or nurture is the prime sway on a person, but that both have powerful effects. How these elements meld is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.
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