It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
I have many friends that I met them during the years I have spand. So, I think I have to keep them because of several reasons. I want to tell you two importnat reason.
First, we know each other very well. They had been with me when I had problems. I rememberd a time, I was in college and I got cold. I did not do any thing and I had a hard exam. I need food and protection. I did yearn for hot soup because my body was weak and I was hungry. While I was sleeping the door bell rang. So, I opened the door and I got surprised. My dear friend bring me many foods and also hot soup. She had been heard that I had bad cold. Thus, he visied me. My friend care about me and I have to keep them. Additionally, they are very helpful and supportive. We speak about many problems that we all have. We have many common interests.
We spend our leisure time together. Many of my friends have kids. Our kids play together. Our husbands also are friends. Wegather in parties, we dance, laugh and we enjoy these times.
Secondly, I have issue in finding new friends. I am not very social person. I think finding new friends need many skills and person that they have issue in these properties must preserve the friends that they have. I am a calm person and I speak barely with person that i do not know them well. So, for finding new one i have to improve my social abilities or I can do the easy work, saving the old friends. I met many of my friends in high school and we are been together for about 10 years. This is a lot of time. Do not keeping them is madness.
Because of these reason I prefer to keep my old friends. They are very precious. I like them not only because of their kindness but also because of the way they treat to me. Weather I want it or not I have no chance to find friends better than mine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...in college and I got cold. I did not do any thing and I had a hard exam. I need food and ...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...not do any thing and I had a hard exam. I need food and protection. I did yearn f...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... hard exam. I need food and protection. I did yearn for hot soup because my body ...
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Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ause my body was weak and I was hungry. While I was sleeping the door bell rang. So, ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have. We have many common interests. We spend our leisure time together. Many o...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st preserve the friends that they have. I am a calm person and I speak barely wit...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...son and I speak barely with person that i do not know them well. So, for finding ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f time. Do not keeping them is madness. Because of these reason I prefer to keep my old...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05586592179 4.8611393121 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16214109003 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469273743017 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 30.0 9.59856630824 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9310860646 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 41.4857142857 100.406767564 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.2285714286 20.6045352989 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.88571428571 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145315745502 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370928591808 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552287875424 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921202093818 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522692829604 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.8 11.7677419355 24% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 58.1214874552 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.1575268817 36% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.79 10.9000537634 44% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.85 8.01818996416 73% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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