The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business distrcit.

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The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business distrcit.

naturalistic observation is research that involves studying the subject of interest in its own environment, as it would occur in day-to-day life. researchers strive to not make changes to the environment, as such changes may influence the outcome of the study. since the entire point of this method is to observe things as they occur naturally, such an outcome is not desired. naturalistic observation is research that involves studying the subject of interest in its own environment, as it would occur in day-to-day life. researchers strive to not make changes to the environment, as such changes may influence the outcome of the study. since the entire point of this method is to observe things as they occur naturally, such an outcome is not desired. naturalistic observation is research that involves studying the subject of interest in its own environment, as it would occur in day-to-day life. researchers strive to not make changes to the environment, as such changes may influence the outcome of the study. since the entire point of this method is to observe things as they occur naturally, such an outcome is not desired. naturalistic observation is research that involves studying the subject of interest in its own environment, as it would occur in day-to-day life. researchers strive to not make changes to the environment, as such changes may influence the outcome of the study. since the entire point of this method is to observe things as they occur naturally, such an outcome is not desired. naturalistic observation is research that involves studying the subject of interest in its own environment, as it would occur in day-to-day life. researchers strive to not make changes to the environment, as such changes may influence the outcome of the study. since the entire point of this method is to observe things as they occur naturally, such an outcome is not desired. naturalistic observation is research that involves studying the subject of interest in its own environment, as it would occur in day-to-day life. researchers strive to not make changes to the environment, as such changes may influence the outcome of the study. since the entire point of this method is to observe things as they occur naturally, such an outcome is not desired.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 33.7804878049 178% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 3.97073170732 604% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 965.302439024 196% => OK
No of words: 372.0 196.424390244 189% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08602150538 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97461511252 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 43.0 106.607317073 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.115591397849 0.547539520022 21% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 283.868780488 211% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 18.0 1.07073170732 1681% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 14.3836326736 43.030603864 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 5.23603664747 7% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.43 8.06136585366 67% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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