Machines have taken over domestic jobs that used to be done by hand. What are advantages and disadvantages of this?
Previously, most man jobs are used to be done by hand, but now machines controlled and taken over domestic jobs. That’s why there is advantages and disadvantages why this era has taken over man hand jobs.
For several reasons, employers benefit from using machines in their works instead of using man hands. First, their profit will increase, the number of employees will decline, therefore they won’t pay high salaries because there will be a need for few labors to operate and check the machines. Other advantage, they will save time and hardness especially while producing small items. For example, most food factories are using machines to produce their products, where production will increase, additionally to professional packaging, food safety and quality.
On the other hand, many believe that machines brought disadvantages over domestic jobs. First, the rate of unemployment will raise, Governments will face problems with this number of unemployed. Economically, demand on purchasing will decrease due to lack of job opportunities and salaries. Second from security side, growth in number of thefts and crimes, especially in rural countries where machines controlled their work. For example, all cars these days are made by machines, man will play only the role of supervision, checking if the production is done well.
As a conclusion, machines have advantages and disadvantages over domestic jobs, but from my point of view I think machines made our lives easier and helped us in creating and developing tiny things that saved spaces and a lot of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are advantages'?
Suggestion: there are advantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82595116731 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6583782016 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342580995841 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130035073048 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135390441962 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23858110248 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157637417179 0.056905535591 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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