Completing university education is thought by some to be the
best way to get a good job. On the other hand, people also say
that getting experience and developing soft skills is more
important.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why
you chose that position. Support your point of view with details
from your own experiences, observations or reading.
We all need to work and gaining experience and knowledge will ensure
that we are useful employees or business owners. Whether you
complete a degree or learn the soft skills while working is a choice we
all must make. This essay will discuss why choosing university first is a
better option in the long term.
University study will help set you up for a professional career with a
recognised qualification. It is possible to develop an academic
understanding of a career while studying as an undergraduate and then
post graduate student. For example, teachers study at university to
understand teaching theory and practice. Becoming a professional
requires learning before a person can practice in that profession.
Working can help you build important interpersonal skills as well as give
you practical and useful knowledge and experience. Learning on the job
can give you enough training to master the requirements of the job. For
example, airline stewards, retail workers, tradespeople, office
managers, do not attend university but learn skills that that enable them
to work. In other words, learning the skills specific to a real job can pay
off for many people.
This essay argued that gaining a university qualification can set a
person up with a long-term career, while learning skills in a real job can
create a career as well. In my opinion, study at university can give you
the opportunity to develop critical thinking and build a career based on
your interests.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 16, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... not attend university but learn skills that that enable them to work. In other words, l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2304526749 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96162521241 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551440329218 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6879845756 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.7692307692 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.12807881773 533% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145515228274 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579359451886 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299069858237 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434514770994 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333323245183 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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