The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagre?
It is argued that the new coverage should focus more on good reports. And i completely agree with this opinion.
There are a variety of reasons why the media channels should consist of more news which contain positive contents. The first reason is that people will be discovering more information about politics, economies, environmental issues and human life. The society has its own two faces, one face is about good aspects have been achieved, and another face involves rough aspects is happened in our life. Hence we should have the an objective vision to become a knowledgeable man. Furthermore, good news in the media may have positive effects on the general publics. It could restore our faith in humanity. For instance, some reports talking about philanthropists usually do charity for disavantaged people will uphold ethical social values.
Apart from the pratical benefits expressed above, i believe the media still exists the negative report to insult or humiliate some people. For example, some famous such as singers or models, they certainly suffered from scandalous scandals, and among them there were false rumors. Thus, it will affect badly in their life and career. Another thing is that bad news dominating the headlines is having an undesirable influence on society. Unless the media manage properly, readers won't fall in a state of stress or trauma. For instance, there are many articles talked about dog theft and many dogs are killed for people to eat. It could caused massive damage to people's mental states and instilled fear into their minds.
In conclusion, i believe recounting
more stories of good news can positively affect the moral behavior of a group of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, thus, another thing, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15884476534 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56943355971 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646209386282 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5407837772 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0588235294 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216692902554 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628752295162 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658454427829 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117748885994 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766624332866 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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