The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average of number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The graph and table illustrates the average of temperatures and hours of sunshine in three different countries : London, New York and Sydney. Overall, London and New York have similar fluctuations average in temperatures, however Sydney has different fluctuations in temperatures.
According to the graph, London and New York have the highest degree in July to August. On the other hand, Sydney has lowest temperature in July. Also, during the December to February, Sydney has warm weather, while New York and London were cold during that period.
By the table, New York stood out the annual hours of sunshine among other countries at 2,535. Sydney also has similar amount of sunshine with New York, at 2,473. However, London has the lowest average a number of hours of sunshine per year.
As a result, average of London is the coldest among the three countries while has similar average of temperature with New York. Sydney also have longest warmer weather than London and New York, which has higher degree than the average of temperatures in London and New York.
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. 73
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 56
- These days, many school-aged children own a smart phone.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at 250 words. 56
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales bewteen 1918 and 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(IELTS ACADEMIC 13 61
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the lowest'.
Suggestion: has the lowest
...ly to August. On the other hand, Sydney has lowest temperature in July. Also, during the D...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07386363636 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55338481457 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465909090909 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1891006603 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223941121681 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12906205864 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131580748477 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161723328765 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756800218048 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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