Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Most of the major cities are facing the problem of traffic congestion and living place shortage due to high density of companies. Few people believe that this problem can be resolved by shifting large company to the countryside. However, there is a section of people who oppose this notion. I will scrutinize both the aspects before forming any opinion at the end.
To embark on, all major cities are deluge of population as availability of jobs are more. Consequently, traffic jam and short of apartments for living have raised. All cities are designed to handle specific amount of crowd. However, due to good facilities and road condition, most of the business group prefer cities to open their office or manufacturing hub which eventually lead to traffic jam and housing shortage issue. The problem can be tackled easily if big companies are shifted to few kilometers away from the city. It will not only ease traffic and hosing issue in city but also bring prosperity to the countryside. Because, company will shift to a remote place only if government construct roads and give basic facilities like electricity, water at low-cost. These low-cost facilities will help a company to earn more profit and villagers can enjoy the same at low-cost.
However, few people argue that shifting companies to nearby village will disturb the eco-system of the village and sooner or later that village will be populated with crowd and pollution level of countryside will increase which lead to detrimental health effect on animals, birds and villagers of that area as well.
To recapitulate, shifting major companies to a nearby village is the need of the hour. Otherwise, traffic and housing problem will deteriorate more day-by-day. However, pollution issue can be well tackled if government impose strict law and no deviation to guilty companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14617940199 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72590501698 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0669686206 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183043750746 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654518848146 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382361363097 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116387563476 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057104878086 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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