You are moving to a new country ,write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house
In your letter describe
Yourself and your family
Which area you would like to live in
And what facilities you need in the house.
Dear manager,
my name is Oksana Zaiets. I am writing to you to rent a house to stay there for two weeks with my family. So, there will be live 4 adults.
I'm interested in your rental at 19 Foxcroft Crescents. I and my family are searching for a peaceful place to live near the sea in Toronto. we are quiet and studious, majoring in engeniring and accounting, and capable of paying rent through jobs. our application packet is ready for review. I described all facilities what we need for a comfortable staying there. our I would love to get your the confirmation.
you can contact me by the following phone number is 831-555-5555.
Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.
Oksana
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| 2019-07-17 | harikatalanki | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 588.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 127.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62992125984 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73750890189 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708661417323 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 290.88556701 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4489694159 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.0 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.5833333333 16.8248392259 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232551712251 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792830567716 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065201375499 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142219851345 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058648725417 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.39 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.