Internet has made our life easier
Some people may indicate that internet has made our day to day more comfortable and accessible. Others may say that internet has created dependency and addiction from our phones and computers. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that internet has made our life easier. The reasons for my believes are personal, economic and social.
First of all, from a personal point of view, Internet has provided more connections between individuals. Having a smartphone or a computer has enable the society to interact more frequently with others and have more meaningful relationships. For example, people who live abroad have the opportunity to talk with their families everyday using different mobile resources. This scenario has created the ability to share meaningful moments even if they are miles away.
Economically, the world wide web has facilitated transactions. Individuals from all over the world are able offer their services and get paid which has increase the employment rate across the planet. Several human beings from remote countries are able to work for multinational companies. For example, India and Africa have thousands of developers working for companies in the United States of america or even in Europe making the employees being able to have a better quality of life. In addition, people from around the world are able to sell things that do not use anymore and make money thanks to the different payment methods which uses internet.
Lastly, important social causes have been shared thanks to the web and has helped millions of people. Individuals from remote regions are now able to share their issues and enable rich people from other countries to help them. In my experience, this is one of the most powerful and meaningful achievements that internet has caused because it helps the world to be a better place.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that internet has made our life easier. This is because the web helps sharing moments, facilitates transactions which increase the employment and helps the society to be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...ade our life easier. The reasons for my believes are personal, economic and social. F...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
.... Having a smartphone or a computer has enable the society to interact more frequently...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...opportunity to talk with their families everyday using different mobile resources. This ...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to share' or 'share'.
Suggestion: to share; share
...e easier. This is because the web helps sharing moments, facilitates transactions which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1951951952 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71564800986 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5227713439 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255468734335 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104077608425 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195792075668 0.0737576698707 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1801191365 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181326442197 0.0645574589148 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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