Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include:
– Ask where to find a place to live
– Tell them what type of place you’re looking for
– Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there
Dear Sarah and Smitha,
I hope you’re getting on well in Yorkshire. I’m sure you’ll be pleased to know that I too will be moving in there along with my family coming month. I hope it's not too much to ask, but could you help me finding a nice residential locality to move in?
As for the house, you know how much Emma and Pete love swimming. It’d be great if the property has a pool, and not to forget the yard-Anil plans to have his own kitchen garden and come up with new recipes with all the home-grown, organic vegetables. Can you guys help me find such an individual house with these facilities?
So, have you been continuing with the football? Did you manage to find a team? Well, count me in; I’ll be joining the match everyday just the way I used to here. That reminds me of all those penalties and winning goals. Its been dull and boring since you left.
Can’t wait to see you all. Just drop me a line when you are free.
Best regards,
Kim
- You are living overseas and you have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information are incorrect. Write a letter to the editor.In the letter, you should:– explain that an article contains wrong information– 84
- Your friends recently moved to a new city You will also be moving to the same city Write a letter to your friends and include Ask where to find a place to live Tell them what type of place you re looking for Share some fun things you would like to do when 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ong with my family coming month. I hope its not too much to ask, but could you help...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as for, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46703296703 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36177469556 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9428310046 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0714285714 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236736047078 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878084551929 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528706785593 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126342640677 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773392445877 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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