The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think that this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health.
Over the past few decades, children have been facing the ongoing obesity problem. Although fair amount of people advocate that, rapid increment over establishment of fast food restaurants and hotels are causing the problem. Other,however, argue that, parents are responsible towards negligence over their children's habit.This essay will discuss on both views and will come to explicit point on why the blame goes to parents hands.
Those who advocate the former point, believe that, enormous numbers of fast food outlets were established just under quick period of time and products they keep on menu is especially adulterated. Subsequently, they think that, fast food restaurants outnumbered the normal restaurants and thereby influencing the children's habit. Furthermore,
research from world health organization has pointed out that number of obese children are fairly high in developed countries than it was in 20 years ago.
On the other hand, it is evident that, parents from developed countries have been spoiling their children continuously. Since the advent of technological gadgets, children are particularly interested in spending sedentary lifestyle. Moreover, mothers are markedly interested in engaging on jobs oriented activities which cause children to expose less towards physical fitness thereby causing them to put on unnecessary weight.
In conclusion, although growing numbers of fast food and outlets are contributing in this particular problem, parents must be the one to restrict their children's unnecessary eating habit. They really need to focus on controlling their diets and maintaining a good schedule for extra fitness classes.
- The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others however believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's 67
- The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think that this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's he 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75303643725 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90624534871 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63967611336 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1777044377 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327192643166 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11663617723 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652240861138 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169205605095 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361718143034 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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