In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Invasion of internet in our homes made it easy for all family members to follow the news and what is happening in the world easily while they are on their laptops. Whether during studying, surfing the Facebook and using other applications or even watching a video on the you tube.
One of the main reasons why young people prefer getting their news updates from the internet instead of the newspaper or TV, is that these ways has faded and that these ways don’t interest the new generations. For them it is a very boring unattractive way to just read a black and white newspaper or watch a news report on TV. The internet has its advanced eye catching ways to display news.
An essential way to make newspapers and TV news come back to being followed is developing them to be appealing to the young. Recently many TV channels managed to do that through talk shows, instead of demonstrating the news in the old traditional way, an interviewer starts telling the news in a series of stories of how the incident happened, what the responsible rulers feels about it and what actions are going to be applied. They also allow those responsible and the eye witnesses to communicate with them through life telephone interviews. This somehow makes the viewer feel that he is indirectly interacting with the new reporters.
In conclusion, in order for traditional ways to come back to life, we have to understand how the new generation evolved and what interests them best in order to find a middle ground of communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79545454545 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72786188922 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0146252694 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235238415874 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08115880973 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532149537784 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119503047879 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049175660252 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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