Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and many children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
No matter what type of work one need to do, everywhere computer is being used like for shopping, in education, to play video games, for socializing, et-cetera and gaming industry is on rise from all of these. This video gaming invention has provided a lot of benefits from economic point of view and also enable people to entertain their self at home; however, there is a big problem with these games- people waste a lot of time on it which can be utilized in other areas but with correct use of computer games can minimize it's negative effects.
Playing computer games impact people of all ages directly and indirectly. Firstly, it is the fact that children mostly influenced by video games and they spend most of their time by playing these on computer systems and mobiles whenever they have a chance. No doubt games sharper human mind and many educational games do provide academic knowledge, but it promotes sedentary life style too which becomes the reason for various diseases later on. In china, for instance, most of children suffer from eye related problems due to the use of electronic gadgets for video games because rays of computer and mobile screens cause vision problems. Secondly, the increasing trend of online group games among youngsters decrease social relationship as most of the youngsters like to play games with strangers using internet rather than socializing in society in person. It affects the relationship and promote isolation which has extreme impact on culture and society. Like most of the youngsters nowadays addicted to a world-famous game PUBG and spend most of their time playing it. Thus, it’s clear that technology like computer games impacting human being in a negative manner.
It is impossible to completely eliminate negative effects of video games on human being and also impossible to ban these games, but a number of steps can be taken to minimize it's adverse effects. To begin with children can be restricted to use of educational games only because these type of games do not become addiction and also provide valuable academic knowledge which helps them in their study. Online stores and shopkeepers can make rule to enable games downloading or purchasing with age proof only and by taking this small step non educational games would not reach to children. Moreover, parents and teachers can promote outdoor sports among students and it's only possible via spreading awareness. A sports and health related subject in every class can make a huge change to stop increasing use of video games. If youngsters would be influenced towards health sports, they will minimize the use of video games which will not only beneficial for health, it can also become one's’ career in future.
In conclusion, gaming industry is making a big position in information technology which provides employment and entertainment to many people but some of its side effects hurting children and youngsters badly. Some small steps can be taken to shorter adverse effects of video games like downloading limitation and promoting health activities and it is only possible with help of teachers and parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1014, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...diseases later. In china, for instance, most of children suffer from eye related problems due to...
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Line 1, column 1698, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative manner" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ke computer games impacting human being in a negative manner. It is impossible to completely elimina...
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Line 1, column 2696, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...neficial for health, it can also become ones career in future. In conclusion, gaming...
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Line 1, column 2708, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... health, it can also become ones career in future. In conclusion, gaming industry is maki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2604.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 514.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06614785992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60863239688 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486381322957 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 835.2 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7918199121 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303673598233 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109212655143 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701592391555 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303673598233 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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