Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages or disadvantages of living in a house compared to living in an apartment.
A lot find it more convenient living in an apartment within a complex rather than living in an independent home. I strongly believe that the desirable outcomes from living in a house is much higher than from living in an apartment, and here is why.
Although some might find it less costly to live in an apartment, living in a home will also save a lot of money in other ways. You and your children will definitely would want to go to a park or to swimming pool to relax and get out some energy, this will ultimately force a family living in an apartment to pay memberships for each individual in the family in a club so they can fulfill having a place to enjoy the sun and use the pool. While living in an independent home will give you the space, instead of paying annual membership fees you can build your own pool, recently it can actually cost less than the annual fees being paid for all family members in a club. One can also have a sitting area in his back yard to enjoy a sunny day without the need of going to a park and pay an entrance fee. Although some parks are free to the public still you will either find it noisy or you will not feel comfortable enjoying the day with crowds around you.
Another factor that we can acknowledge is the idea of being independent and enjoying some privacy.. Despite the fact of having to respect the space between you and the person living next door, but a lot of times you ought to invite over some friends and have some music on, this will be a huge inconvenience to your neighbor and he might as well call in the police for the noise your making. Living in a big home you will not have to face such unwanted situation. You can party all night in your property without being disturbed by anyone.
In conclusion, it highly depends on each ones priorities, whether the pros and cons between living in a house and living in apartment is suitable for him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, still, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34357541899 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33135827839 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516759776536 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7962821574 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291879083117 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133616849274 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115727804188 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217397012757 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116400587491 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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