Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? Give examples of your knowledge.
It is often believed that plastic pollution in a major problem in today world. The environmental degradation done by plastic is the rising issue. I am totally agree that plastic bag and other plastic product are polluting land and sea as well as damaging the habit of animals who are living in it.
Firstly, Plastic is such thing which cannot be decomposed. It's creating various problem in land and sea. Animals don't know about the plastic they eat them and many animals are dead as well as sea creature and varieties of fish are consuming plastic and they are going to extinct. For example in past many fish used to be found in the rivers, sea but today the number is decreased by half and so on with the animals like cow, buffalo, goat these animals also are getting problem while they are in the field feeding them self. I believe if these plastic products are not managed then many animals, birds and living organism will get damage and which will also affect in bio-diversity in the world.
Secondly, increase in the production of plastic bag and other plastic materials are increasing pollution. Although garbage are collect in dumping area and plastics too. These plastics are burnt which gives birth to the carbon mono oxide which affect the green house in the atmosphere. Thus, it will bring out global warming in the earth and affect on Eco system. For example increasing temperature, untimely rain fall, melting of snow and others. When this occurs then vegetation in land animals in sea plants trees and other animals life cycle gets effect and many problem arise.
To sum up, In my view I would band the plastic products and also I'll raise community program to stop the use of plastic and request government to stop plastic and raise the people to use the paper bag in terms of plastic.
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| 2019-12-01 | yasir2002011 | 67 | view |
| 2019-04-24 | Rihav Raj Acharya | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...astic is the rising issue. I am totally agree that plastic bag and other plastic prod...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... such thing which cannot be decomposed. Its creating various problem in land and se...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...arious problem in land and sea. Animals dont know about the plastic they eat them an...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ism will get damage and which will also affect in bio-diversity in the world. Secondly...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ing out global warming in the earth and affect on Eco system. For example increasing temp...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...d animals in sea plants trees and other animals life cycle gets effect and many problem...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...ther animals life cycle gets effect and many problem arise. To sum up, In my view I would...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ould band the plastic products and also Ill raise community program to stop the use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7246835443 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33437722241 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541139240506 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4880380133 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213382065813 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076003086315 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482995110092 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140195763831 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414927229273 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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