Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a
small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
You need to explain the following:
1. When and where you hired it?
2. Describe how the accident happened?
3. What kind of action did you take after the accident?
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to report about a minor accident with a hired car from your agency. Let me briefly explain.
To elucidate I had hired a Toyota Innis from your North Avenue branch on Tuesday for three days to go on a short summer vacation to the Blue Mountains in Sydney. Although the drive to the Blue Mountains is tiring as you have to navigate through hilly terrain for 5 hours, however, the quality of the road is excellent except a few rough patches. The accident also happened on one of these rough patches whereby I lost control of the vehicle and the car slammed on the road railing. Though the damage to the vehicle is minor and only the front bonnet has been damaged.
Since the vehicle was covered in insurance, therefore, I immediately called up the insurance company who advised me to take the vehicle to the nearby service centre for the repair. The cost of the repair was estimated at 200 USD of which fifty per cent was covered by insurance so I have paid for the rest of the amount. Hence I will be sharing the original receipts once I arrive back in the town.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to report abou...
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Line 4, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...only the front bonnet has been damaged. Since the vehicle was covered in insuran...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 322, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...I have paid for the rest of the amount. Hence I will be sharing the original receipts...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to your response. Yours faithfully Saad
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54028436019 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35913297882 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7659855876 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186798717166 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557014381249 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468306715429 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984044011249 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643676582132 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.