Some people prefer to plan activities for free time carefully, whereas others think that it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that better planning lead to successful event. Some people organize their pursuit for spending their spare time wisely, however, others consider it a wastage of their time. In my opinion, I believe that planned events are ultimately successful in comparison to unplanned events for managing time and money.
On the one hand, some people make plans to manage their time and budget effectively before commencing any pursuit. This would in turn save them from haphazard action and simultaneously help them to avoid unnecessary debt. Moreover, it is essential to consider other factors such as work schedules and time tables ahead of time in order to attain fruitful outcomes. For instance, according to a report publish in Tour Travel magazine in Philippine, people would save 40% off on their overall expenses by having an itinerary before setting off on vacations.
On the other hand, there are people who are reluctant to work out any schedule for activities rather than they prefer to be spontaneous. The mainstay why this trend appeals them most is because they consider for problems or unpredictable situation which may encounter during the activity where things do not work according to plan. Hence, they like to pursue chances and live in the moment. To illustrate, it is observed from a survey report conducted at University of Oxford that 85% of the students were found enthralled and fascinated to take unplanned excursions.
In conclusion, I believe that we could save our valuable time and money unless we organized and manage our events appropriately and this would eventually leads to remarkable results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...e, they like to pursue chances and live in the moment. To illustrate, it is observed from a s...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...appropriately and this would eventually leads to remarkable results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76545850972 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.727295696 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245337133141 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856502122455 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712377973039 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139001430801 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719998202743 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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