Across the world today. the use of many languages has been declinine. Only a few language have been increasingly used. Is this a positive or negative development?
Last decade has witnessed a plethora of numerous sophisticated areas specially in education system. However, this huge improvement , there is another aspect which is learning a limit language . In my own perspective this attitude has many advantages, some of them will be discussed in the following lines.
First of all, concentrating on a specific language save numerous vital elements such as, save money for the parents and their students , save time , and the essential element is saving the student’s effort. All these different elements can be used in large way on other subjects or hobies. For example, my brother,s son who is learning just only one language , can play football in his spare time comparing with his friend who learn three different languages does not have any free time to practice on sports . Moreover, the students can achieve successful various goals in many several areas as language and sports.This is why learning few language is better learning many various.
Secondly, one language helps the person to acquire the knowledge of its country , have range aspects of its culture , and traditions which allow for anyone to have a stunning successful business .In addition, have some friends taking the same language with same culture . Thus, learning a specific one language helps a lot in multiple aspects.
It can be concluded that , although the huge sophisticate of learning and education system, I believe that learning few languge has numerous mertis than learning many different languages .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29752066116 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81770225812 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607438016529 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3386011309 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.2 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19717538022 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792973063808 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460079313064 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11854524525 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244665586929 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.