You were late for a friend’s wedding recently and would like to explain why.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• apologize for being late
• explain the reason why you were late
• suggest some activities you could do together when you both have time
Dear Peter,
I’m just writing to say thank you for the invite to your spectacular wedding last weekend. it truly was an amazing day out and one that I won’t ever forget. The setting by the sea was breath taking but I really have to apologize for arriving a bit late.
As you are aware, I recently got my BMW’s engine fixed. However, I had engine problems again on the morning of your wedding. I tried everything to get the motor running but in the end I had to give up and call a taxi. then the driver get a little lost on the way, so in the end I was maybe 5 minutes late and missed the starting of the wedding.
I know it was such a big day for you and I felt so ashamed to not to be there from the start. so since I missed the start of the ceremony, I would love to make it up to you. I have tickets to see a Broadway show next Friday. How about it? my shout! Please let me know by Thursday if you can join me and I’ll hold the tickets until then.
Best wishes, Jeff
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: Then
...e end I had to give up and call a taxi. then the driver get a little lost on the way...
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Suggestion: My
...roadway show next Friday. How about it? my shout! Please let me know by Thursday i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.05527638191 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19706629981 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5303681515 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0769230769 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233730518842 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690153116807 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634675045982 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154064370383 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391274043362 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.