The two pictures show the changes of buildings in Liberton Doc's between 1980 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps illustrate how buildings in liverton docks altered between 1980 and now .
Overall ,the entire map has been reconstructed.Two new bridges have been build on the right of map, across the river which is in the middle of the map and leads to the coast.A new path has been added in the present map. .One feature is that all ships in 1980 map has been disappeared.
To the upside of the river , all the warehouse and crane in 1980 have been removed and replaced by the new buildings,clubs and kid play are from left to right.
At another riverside, a new path has been added along the river and lots of buildings and facilities have been constructed along this particular path , including sailing shop, converted building , apartment and park.
The purpose of liverton docks has been altered from commercial shipping , which is the original fuction , to entertainment purposes.
- The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The two pictures show the changes of buildings in Liberton Doc's between 1980 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The maps show the village park 10 years ago and the village car park now 93
- Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others argue it is the responsibility of each individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- the table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria the Northern Territory and Tasmania Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...shipping , which is the original fuction , to entertainment purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89333333333 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78193311813 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2436119388 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091721629116 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595310381127 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496555563636 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05857095156 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053293147985 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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