You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a seminar in a foreign country. Write a letter to the seminar organiser and say
– What problem did you face there?
– Why do you want to complain about it?
– What is your suggestion for improvement in the future?
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to bring to your notice the problem that I faced in Hill Top Hotel, Singapore. I have reached Singapore today morning at 8 P.M. Once I checked in my room, I have revealed that air condition is faulty. As you know, Singapore is super humid these days and faulty air condition makes my stay unpleasant.
Initially, I have informed the hotel manager about the issue and he seems to be very reluctant about the problem. I have requested for room change as well, but they simply deny because there is no extra room available. I am requesting you to change my hotel as soon as possible so that I can give final touch to my presentation for tomorrow’s seminar.
Kindly do check hotel conditions prior to book a room, which will help you to avoid this kind of issues. Moreover, you can reserve extra room for your client to avoid room non-availability. Had not landed on Singapore early morning, I would have been in a difficult condition.
I hope you understand my circumstance and hope to see positive response in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...el, Singapore. I have reached Singapore today morning at 8 P.M. Once I checked in my room, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80802112508 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6635631702 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285685497363 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100827780881 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550936342735 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159678027571 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442397991135 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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