In general people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbors as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbors?
neighbour play indispensable role in people's life that can not turn blind eye to its importance it is a irrefutable to say that close relationship with their neighbour has been changed in current day then period of time and if the some strict plans are not formulated , relationship of neighbours can be suffered
The formost factor to note is that in present pragmatic scenario people have a money of making money that make people greedy and unintentionally they chasing the money because of inflation. consequently ,they cannot spend time with their family and also their neighbours even they do not know about their next gate.Moreover, technology has the second main causes of gap between neighbours as people are lover of the new gadgets they spend maximum time on such things for example young generation become a victim of technology they play games watch movies and majority of time they live at their home, in term of they become introvert
However every lock has a keys so this problem also have a solution firstly people should give attention to relationship even it's a relation ship of their neighbour and know about the value of relation as a neighbour is the second home those are stand by us in the critical situation.Not only this but also, people ought to become socialize and need to learn about how to mingle with each other and also spend more and more time with their neighbours so that they get socialize and share their feelings and emotions. Hence , it is essential to individual should improve the relation of neighbours and treat well and give respect to them
To conclude, it is restated that a greed of money and technology both are main causes of gap between neighbours.However, people have to need get together and spend time with them so that it become healthy relations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87662337662 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74484854744 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512987012987 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.2975951904 503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 264.213297672 49.4020404114 535% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 500.666666667 106.682146367 469% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.666666667 20.7667163134 494% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.3333333333 7.06120827912 500% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251382514951 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16125898274 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440635003273 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150971779068 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266874336932 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.9 13.0946893788 404% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.59 50.2224549098 -47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.9 11.3001002004 371% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.1190380762 423% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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