The bar chart shows active participation rates in top 10 sports in 1998 and 2005

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s in Canada in the year of 1998 and 2005 Overall, except for soccer, the other...
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...the year of 1998 and 2005 Overall, except for soccer, the other sports&apos...
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...s witnessed a fall from 1998 to 2005 In 1998, as can be seen, golf was the mo...
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...te. But like most of the top ten sports,This type of sport became less interesting t...
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...iing by 2%, cycling and tennis by 2% The most dramatic fall out of ten sports...
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...tic fall out of ten sports was baseball, from 17% in 1998 to 7% in 2005. Meanwh...
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...ll out of ten sports was baseball, from 17% in 1998 to 7% in 2005. Meanwhile, ...
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... 17% in 1998 to 7% in 2005. Meanwhile, Soccer seemed to catch more attention wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67132867133 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72345079162 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65034965035 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.4926829268 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.5067642995 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.666666667 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 47.6666666667 22.9334400587 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467549417767 0.215688989381 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.278242213143 0.103423049105 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180232661028 0.0843802449381 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322057471316 0.15604864568 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155303866664 0.0819641961636 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.2329268293 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.9970731707 189% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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