Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Along with the development of countries and the global as the whole, some people say that there are many choices for human being while others disagree with this opinion. To me, based on my knowledge and point of view, I would say that I partly agree with the former opinion for some following reasons.
Firstly, In term of economic life, it is obvious that never has the living standard of people been higher than now. Particularly, thanks to the mass of new technologies such as internet, computer or even the stunning development in the transportation field, Productivity of all company generally rises unbelievably. The second reason I would mention here is about the education. If before, hardly can we choose the dreamed school with the good facilities and quality of teachers then now we have variable options of campuses fitting with our criteria from the location, the major of study to our budget… Let’s take the story of my family as an example. Study overseas was the biggest ambition in life of my father but he couldn’t achieve it due to the unaffordable high tuition while today, my teenager sister when following an international exchange program could make my father dream come true. Besides, the fact that a range of magical advances in medicine field which save millions people from the deathly illnesses is another strong point that I can deny.
On the other hands, just because that we have a great number of achievements in each side of the life does mean that it becomes absolutely better or easier than in the past. The first thing we have to face is that in order to have a better material life, adults would probably suffer the endless stress in the mental health. In deed, the statistics show that there is a continuous increase in the number of suicide cases annually. Also, the worse relationship in families is another disadvantage of the hurry living style today. Indeed, the worry about losing the job or the pressure in work pushes people in the situation that they rarely spend time on themselves or families. As the consequence, the gap between them and their spouses or children will be enlarged, following the upward trend of divorce rate. The final point we must not ignore is the environment problem. The simple reason why each year, there are always some high summits among the countries’ leaderships about the pollution problem especially the co2 emission is that we are unable to avoid this serious problem anymore.
To conclude, we appreciate all the gifts from life and enjoy them (gains) but we also need to be aware of the opposite side of the present picture (pains) - to stay strong and keep the optimistic spirit to debate all of the latter.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-05 | Nayan Soni | 56 | view |
| 2019-12-02 | kaka singh | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-15 | Motu | 56 | view |
| 2019-10-03 | Saahaar | 78 | view |
| 2019-09-30 | Mampee | 73 | view |
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 78
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 89
- the bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (In) must be used with a third-person verb: 'terms'.
Suggestion: terms
... some following reasons. Firstly, In term of economic life, it is obvious that ne...
^^^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...nd keep the optimistic spirit to debate all of the latter.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87229437229 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62438293117 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.041082164 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58658008658 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5234376518 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.411764706 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1764705882 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176676374326 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479246247532 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546940316494 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106565046825 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609886874545 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.