You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter,
• apologize for damaging the product
• explain what happened
• say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Jay,
How are you? Hope you are fine. I am writing to apologize for spoiling your camera. Unfortunately, I am afraid to say that the camera which I have borrowed from you has damaged.
Let me explain the situation in detail. As you are aware that I have borrowed your camera for my holiday trip to Goa. I am really glad that I took right thing from right person and I enjoyed capturing memories with the help of your camera. Today, when I was coming to your house to return this camera, I had a little argument with a motor cyclist and in that course he pushed me to the ground. I lost my balance and I was unable to handle your camera due to which there are some slight cracks in optic lens of the camera.
I am extremely sorry to create hassle for you. But you don’t need to worry as I will ensure that I will get it repaired from well renowned repairing shop so that the damaged glass is replaced with original one. Once it is repaired I will hand over your camera in proper condition.
I hope you will forgive me and accept my apologies. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best Regards,
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed glass is replaced with original one. Once it is repaired I will hand over your ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37440758294 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28394718101 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587677725118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8408179073 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5333333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253011091363 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961301060006 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644358520819 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16950872584 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086553544798 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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