Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, children are opting more and more junk food than home-made food .Although,fast food has less nutritional value than healthy food, but still, the trend of eating junk food is catching among the younger generation.There are numerous reasons that are driving children towards unhealthy options.
To begin with, parents are working too much hours so they don't have time to prepare food at home.Therefore,fast food shops now are opening every day,you can find in each corner of the street .These shops are easily approachable and reasonably priced,though, eating in these restaurants is becoming a part of the status symbol among youngest people, thus children are spending a significant share of their pocket-money at these places.
Moreover,fried foods have bad impacts on children health such as cholesterol and heart functioning.When food is fried,it looses nutritional values and lead to fatigue.The consumption of processed food can make children obese and it is behind health problems.
To sum up,fast food is more available and not over priced , it has less nutritional values .Over consumption of junk food causes health problems .Therefore, it is advisable to eat more healthy food than fast food for a fit and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41025641026 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13636936382 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9090738977 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 263.75 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.75 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198809349585 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130246180843 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416838788667 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130246180843 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416838788667 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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