The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts compare three ages categories, 0-14,15-59, and 60+ years old, in 2000 and 2050 for the population of Yemen and Italy.
Overall, as it can be seen Yemenian people will become younger, while Italian population will change to old people.
As is given in the charts, there were an increase in 0-14 and 15-59 years old groups by about 2% and over 10% respectively in Yemen. The 60 and over years old category decreased by about 13% in the same years.
On the other hand, 0-14 years old population in Italy decline from 14.3% in 2000 to 11.5% in 2050. 15-59 years old group reduce as same as the previous category by approximately 15%, whereas 60+ years old people rise roughly 18% and will stand on 42.3 in 2050.
- The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. 78
- Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is nacceptable in contemporary society.Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion. 61
- According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world- wide, we should be conce 56
- In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. 56
- The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 595.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54198473282 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34235493755 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1047351337 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167207788266 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994396032545 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113010143423 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122951466569 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117448947525 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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