You left your watch at friend’s home. Write him a letter regarding this.
Dear Daniel,
Thank you for inviting for barbecue in your house. I have spent a wonderful weekend with you and our friends. As you remember, the weather was awesome and I met an interesting person while eating a delicious meat and enjoying myself.
The matter of fact that I forgot my wristwatch at your house, I putted it on the table in the living room while went to swimming. It is golden watch of Titan brand, which was given me by my father. That is why it is keeping precious memories for me and it would be pity if the watch were lost. In addition, there is a sign ‘to my beloved daughter’ on the inner part of the bracelet.
Could please to look for it and return it back as soon as possible. If it is convenient for I will drop to your house tomorrow evening to take it.
Looking forward to see you soon.
Take care,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pos; on the inner part of the bracelet. Could please to look for it and return i...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... evening to take it. Looking forward to see you soon. Take care, Maria
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41509433962 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42485253442 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8449903095 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8181818182 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151731902301 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495115111285 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287492188065 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808089119873 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342685923715 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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