someone has returned your bag with all its belongings that you recently lost. write a letter to thank that person
thank him her
explain how you left your bag
explain why its belongings were important to you
Dear Sumit
I'm writing this to express my gratitude for returning my lost bag.
I can't even express in words how much I'm pleased with your kind action. I'm feeling so blessed after getting my bag back to my own. it's all happened because of you, I was completely hopeless to get it back though, but when I got it from you my joy met no boundary. Since I received with all it's contents.
Actually, I was in the railway station, coming back from my home town, I had brought a lot of food essentials. That is the reason why I did had many bags which was creating many difficulties for me to handle. Therefore, mistakenly I left one there.
I had purchased many items as a souvenir for my friends and all the gifts were the specialty of my hometown. Along with this, some of my academic certificates were also there. You can imagine how important these to someone else's life. That is the reason why I was becoming a bit stressful for losing it.
I wish I could thank you directly, thank you again.
Yours Sincerely
Ritu Magar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sumit Im writing this to express my gratitude fo...
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Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...gratitude for returning my lost bag. I cant even express in words how much Im pleas...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... I cant even express in words how much Im pleased with your kind action. Im feeli...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... much Im pleased with your kind action. Im feeling so blessed after getting my bag...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...ed after getting my bag back to my own. its all happened because of you, I was comp...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...got it from you my joy met no boundary. Since I received with all its contents. Act...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ssentials. That is the reason why I did had many bags which was creating many diffi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41052631579 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49467021896 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3834605706 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8571428571 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291849772709 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970040605242 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643453733283 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159164020055 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669587497315 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.