You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
- say what the participants liked about the hotel
- explain why they were unhappy about the food
- suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
I'm writing to thank you for letting us organize our company all-day meeting at your hotel, it was a great day everything was served and organized properly.
The participants liked a lot the hotel, they liked its location directly near the station and have access to the downtown shops. Interior, they like its concept and how the halls are arranged even the idea of the reception how it is formed. However, they were all amazed by your customer service how the team is well trained.
But, they have small concerns and they were unhappy about the food, especially the sea food. Some got stomach-ache and started vomiting and others got allergic from the shrimps and octopus. There taste was little bitter and it smells stinky.
That's why I would like to accept our comments and reviews regarding the food and we suggest from your side to check with the kitchen chef if the food is fresh or the catering that you are dealing with; since this will have negative reputation on your hotel.
Thank you for accepting our complains and hope we will have other meetings at your hotel.
Best Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Im writing to thank you for letting us org...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... little bitter and it smells stinky. Thats why I would like to accept our comments...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79057591623 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26416637741 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65445026178 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9906444554 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382855087299 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125968632806 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102477399875 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19831317958 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764488275457 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.