You left your watch at friend's home and you want him to send it back. writer him a letter.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
describe your watch
tell him where you left it at
suggest what he can do about it.
Dear Harish,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for my stay at your home in Adelaide last weekend. I had a pleasant time over there and I can not thank you enough for the genuine hospitality you have offered me.
Adelaide is an interesting place for shopping and a diverse range of shopping malls are located there. I bought a brand new Rolex wrist watch for my wife from Rundle street shopping centre keeping her approaching birthday in mind. I was actually tempted by the fascinating brown colour strap and square shaped dial. The dial has roman numbers too. I am very excited about it.
Unfortunately, I couldn’t find it in my luggage when I got back to Sydney. I remember keeping it in your living room- probably in a drawer of the large table. I want to gift it to my wife on her birthday next week and surprise her. However, this can be possible only if you take the burden to send it to my address.
Actually, James Brown - one of my colleagues, is travelling to Sydney from your place this weekend. I can request him to collect it from your house. He lives just a couple of miles away from your apartment. I will pass your address and contact number to him. I think you can hand it over to him without any trouble.
I hope to see you soon in Sydney.
Warm wishes,
Ramesh Navaretta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... at your home in Adelaide last weekend. I had a pleasant time over there and I ca...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... it over to him without any trouble. I hope to see you soon in Sydney. Warm...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48616600791 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49440131977 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6798242373 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7368421053 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3157894737 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78947368421 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271793786565 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767242328701 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651428432368 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139249314555 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854452068533 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.