Some people are reducing their walks, however many health experts says that walking is the best exercise to maintain health. Why do people walk less? What might encourage people to walk longer distance.
In recent times, extreme busy schedule and long hours of travel to reach the offices or schools has snatched time from people to have sufficient walking. This essay will discuss the reasons for it and suggest some of solution to overcome problem.
Firstly, To stand in today's cut throat competition an individual has to work hard for longer hours. this will left them with not time for walking or any exercise. After exhausted day even if they have time their mental condition or stress will not allow them to do so. To overcome this situation, they have set to their fix schedule of daily life which includes time for relaxation and exercise. Secondly, those who travel long hours to reach their workplace, they should use public transport to reach a station before from their work places, and from that point they should walk to their offices.
Moreover, people are tends to work long hours in offices by sitting in chair in front of computer, which will make them obsess and eventually they found hard to walk for fewer distance. For these people, they should take regular break after few hours of working and try to have few steps in office it self. In addition to that, government, medical body should spread awareness among the people regarding the benefits of walking. For a instance, A person who walks daily for an hours have only 1% chance of cardiovascular disease, have less chances of becoming obese and diabetic patient.
To sum up, their is well know saying that, "health is wealth", and it absolutely correct in recent times. Walking less is not insurmountable problem and can be overcome by suggestion explained here.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...blic transport to reach a station before from their work places, and from that po...
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...ing and try to have few steps in office it self. In addition to that, government, medi...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48914992456 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.059902956 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171885749148 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613945528059 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371673322969 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105712750787 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291359420064 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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