Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’ generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
parents' generation: poor in life. Becaues they born at the begining of Resolution and Open, so the entire china is poor. From foods to
There is no limitation on people's willing to permanent and the number of babies that a family owns. What's more, people in my parents' generation has un-changing concept which hold the idea that "The more children a family owns, the greater life will parents have when they become old". Take my parents as an example, my grandmother has 5 children. Actually reseachers indicates that more children a family owns will lead to poorer life, based on the condition of china in 1970s.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
parents generation: poor in life. Becaues they ...
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Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
... generation: poor in life. Becaues they born at the begining of Resolution and Open...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they born at the begining of Resolution and Open, so the entire china is poor. F...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the entire china is poor. From foods to There is no limitation on peoples willin...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...he number of babies that a family owns. Whats more, people in my parents generation h...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1970s'.
Suggestion: in the 1970s
...r life, based on the condition of china in 1970s.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 52.1666666667 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 527.0 1977.66487455 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 407.700716846 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97169811321 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 4.48103885553 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59790492581 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 212.727598566 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707547169811 0.524837075471 135% => OK
syllable_count: 161.1 618.680645161 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8384241873 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100239403553 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439985070415 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463547130952 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067485658711 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271683511826 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 86.8835125448 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.