You play sport (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in
your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter:
- Say how you feel about the news
- Ask about the treatment in the hospital
- Suggest some ways of cheering him/her up
Dear John,
sorry to hear that fallen and fractured your leg. It is extremely unfortunate that you had this
accident, especially when we are having a big match next week.
I understand that admitted in St. John’s Hospital and will be there for a week. I hope well at
the hospital. Although there had been some complaints about St. John’s in the past, I heard
they have improved a lot. Did you get to consult their chief orthopaedician? His is in sports
medicine and he could probably suggest that will help you.
share some good news with you. Our university has granted a sports scholarship for your
studies. I heard it from our coach and you should be getting a letter shortly. So it is not all
gloom!
Do let me know if you need any help. I will visit you at the hospital next week. Till then, bye.
Regards,
Prasad
- You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss,- explaining your situation,- expressing your concern and- suggesting a solution. 73
- You play sport (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player inyour team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter:- Say how you feel about the news- Ask about the treatment in the hospital- Suggest some ways 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Share
...probably suggest that will help you. share some good news with you. Our university...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... with you. Our university has granted a sports scholarship for your studies. I heard ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70860927152 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54947105107 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695364238411 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0306839782 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.6923076923 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6153846154 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266848197658 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800145098402 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510827072406 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10502193017 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574479010573 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.85 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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