You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into
account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
How to punish the lawbreakers is always a difficult topic for the law makers. If circumstances based punishment should be used or each criminal type has its own methods is still in debate. The essay will focus on the pros and cons of each type of punishments and provide the personal opinion for this debate.
On one hand, government could implement a confirmed punishment for each crime such as using a death sentence for a murder or using a capital punishment for corruption etc. This would help people easily to know what they will receive when breaking the laws or committing a crime. Moreover, judgement systems will be quite simple and straightforward since no further investigations might require whenever they know the types of crime. Take shop-lifting is an example. If there is a law that every shop-lifter have to pay back ten times the values which they have stolen and they should been sentenced for several days. In this case, the court time reduces, consequently, it help to save money for operating the law systems. However, this system faces a serious problem by ignoring the fact that each case are not same which probably lead to unfair punishment.
On another hand, authority might implement a law for criminal punishment as individual basis. The certain benefit of this method is it taking consideration of other factors so reduce the unfair judgement and punishment. Let consider a murder case is an example here. In some cases, a murder might be due to the self defense or to protect their family or friends by other criminals. The motivations for these case are understandable and the murder deserve to be forgiven. Therefore, in stead of giving a murder a death sentence as the fixed law, they might have a chance to rehabilitate after a long sentence punishment. Of course, the main drawback for the situation based punishment, is it will take more time to investigate as well as it might required carefully and details investigation
Given the above arguments, I strongly support the flexible punishment idea. This method I believe that will help to better and fairer society and every government should consider them as a base method for judgement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, of course, such as, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8670212766 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76325051666 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537234042553 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2364684393 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272734628017 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087312947721 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051771038513 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112341875158 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646272507237 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.