you were sent to attend a conference.the conference was very useful. You want to prepare a presentation about the conferece to share with your colleagues. Write a letter to your manager. You should write...*why was the conference useful. * what will be the presentation about? * Suggest why the presentation will interest your colleagues.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that my visit to Satellite conference has been very insightful hence I would like to prepare a presentation and share it with my colleagues who would find it very interesting. The presentation will cover deep insights on the upcoming trends satellite industry. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate my visit to Communic Asia in Singapore was very useful as most of the leading vendors from the satellite industry were present. I attended multiple seminars from baseband and satellite operators which were very interesting and shared knowledge about new markets like in-flight connectivity and mobility. Additionally, the seminar also shared the latest technologies and products which can be offered to the customer for these markets. Although I wanted to prepare a detailed presentation however it will make the audience bored hence I will prepare a brief one with key pointers. The presentation will cover satellite technologies for the new markets and some business cases along with the case studies.
Lastly, I believe the presentation will interest many colleagues as in-flight connectivity and mobility business have huge potential in India, therefore, learning new trends will enable to prepare in advance so that we can pitch these solutions to our potential customers.
I look forward to your response and approval.
Yours sincerely
Saud
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-05-14 | vinshu koul | 78 | view |
| 2018-05-29 | Fahad Arif | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that my visit...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response and approval. Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, lastly, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38812785388 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94740988616 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6719547517 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231521392386 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763256107001 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483138435066 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113760998308 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566907446336 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.