The bar chart below shows the employment of all male and female workers by occupation in the UK, in the year 2005.
The given diagram demonstrates the employment of all workers by sex and occupation in the UK in the year 2005 . it is clear from the graph more than 20 percentage of females work in administrative and secretarial similarly large number of males work in skilled trade .
To specify the employees of personal service had 2 percentage and 13 percentage of males and females respectively. further more the male workers of professional associate professional and Technical ,process plant and machinery elementary are almost same .likewise , in the case of women the percentage of workers in managers and senior officials professional , elementary sales and customer service where nearly equal .moreover , sales and customer service females doubled the number of workers with comparing to males via . Where it was 6 percentage of males and 12 percentage of females
Overall it is clear that females add active domains in administration and secretarial.Female and males are as much as equal in many occupations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ge number of males work in skilled trade . To specify the employees of personal s...
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...e and 13 percentage of males and females respectively. further more the male work...
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...age of males and females respectively. further more the male workers of professional a...
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Suggestion: ,
...nal associate professional and Technical ,process plant and machinery elementary a...
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...and machinery elementary are almost same .likewise , in the case of women the perc...
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...ery elementary are almost same .likewise , in the case of women the percentage of ...
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Suggestion: ,
...nagers and senior officials professional , elementary sales and customer service w...
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... and customer service where nearly equal .moreover , sales and customer service fe...
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...mer service where nearly equal .moreover , sales and customer service females doub...
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...r of workers with comparing to males via . Where it was 6 percentage of males and ...
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Suggestion: Female
...mains in administration and secretarial.Female and males are as much as equal in many ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36075949367 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27108431013 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.347813753 43.030603864 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.4 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27580086749 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166936364898 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128382157392 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188479775775 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810953898985 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 61.2550243902 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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