Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
there is no doubt that people are having more choices then it was available earlier. I firmly believe with the notion of belive and this essay will advocate my view.
there are compelling evidences are obtainable to demonstrate this notion of fact. Firstly, due to advancement in transportation industry, one item that is produced in one country is now available all over the world. Secondly, the media industries have played significant role in making audience to aware with choices they have to choose from. For an instance, the Apple devices are the product of american company and now available in all most all the part of world. Moreover, increase in online platforms such as Amzon, Alibaba, Wall-mart has enabled people to choose from rage of products and confirms the doorstep deliver to the customer.
Furthermore, not only product but today, students have wide range of institutions to choose from to build their successful career path in the life. In contras, earlier times only few institutes are available. For an instance, In india in past decade more than 1300 new engineering colleges have started and allowed more than 10,000 students per year to enroll in various courses of their choices. In addition to that, with wide range of availability of courses and study materials more students are getting their field of choices and eventually they positively contributing to nation's economy. If such advancement in all the sectors like healthcare, media and communication technology has not done then one might has left with few choices only.
To sum up, today, it is fact that people are have more choices than ever and have play positive impact on individual's life and well being of nation.
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...n ever and have play positive impact on individuals life and well being of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, then, well, in addition, no doubt, of course, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09929078014 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68146077347 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6440254067 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116958518486 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439321739592 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364687736199 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866554886237 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350158959518 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.