Disadvantages of smart phones
Although smart phones are very useful and beneficial to our lives, they have some disadvantages. First and foremost, students as well as adults are easily addicted to smart phones because there are too many exciting games, appealing websites and so on that make people spend too much time on them. Therefore, instead of maintaining great habits, they create harmful habits that affect result of study and standard of living. Secondly, the more times we use smart phones, the lazier we get. smart phones are so convient and useful that people rely too much on them to search for something or find out information. we can lose our logical thinking or get some problem of brain if we often us smart phones. Last but not least, using smart phones too many has an impact of our health. When we look at screen of smart phones, my eyes easily get tired and we also have headaches. In conclusion, smart phones are great invention of humans but we have to use them suitably and meaningful.
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Sentence: Secondly, the more times we use smart phones, the lazier we get. smart phones are so convient and useful that people rely too much on them to search for something or find out information. we can lose our logical thinking or get some problem of brain if we often us smart phones.
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